Talk:Data decolonization

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Bluebeey

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User:Bluebeey/Decolonizing Data

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The introductory sentence of the lead section is really great at concisely describing the topic. The lead section could mention a brief description of the article's major topics.

Content

The content is relevant to the topic and the content sources are up to date.

"Building complete awareness in indigenous communities of how their data is collected, aggregated." Indigenous should be capitalized.

"Tools such as the census were used to control narratives about Indigenous peoples, counting Indigenous peoples as they were viewed by the Canadian governenment rather than how they viewed themselves." The idea that the Census is used to control narratives may need a citation.

Tone and Balance

The tone is neutral and balanced.

Sources and References

The article may require more sources as it is the first article on this topic in Wikipedia.

Organization

The content is easy to read and well organized. The ‘also look at’ section is usually titled ‘see also’ in Wikipedia.

Overall Feedback

There are no major issues that stand out to me, but the article may benefit from some more sources. Overall, I think Decolonizing Data is a really strong Wikipedia article. Fall202222 (talk) 00:36, 9 December 2022 (UTC)