Talk:Dave McGraw & Mandy Fer

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The 3rd paragraph of this article (reproduced below) reads as if it were taken straight from the band's promo materials, and is, IMO, superfluous puffery within the Wikipedia context, and also might violate NPoV. "Touring the U.S. from coast to coast since 2010, McGraw & Fer have performed in a vast array of venues from large theaters to intimate listening rooms. Individually and collectively, the pair has shared stages with fellow troubadours including The Swell Season, David Wilcox, Willy Porter, Peter Mulvey, Po' Girl, Tony Furtado, Gregory Alan Isakov, Jeffrey Foucault, and many others." Acwilson9 (talk) 02:12, 22 July 2018 (UTC)