Talk:David Astor

Too much emphasis on Myra Hindley
Reference to Myra Hindley need condensing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.75.17.190 (talk) 13:16, 7 July 2016 (UTC)

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Unencyclopaedic phrasing
The phrases "like Lord Longford" and "the likes of Lord Longford". These phrases do not strike me as neutral in tone nor encyclopaedic; they do not supply any factual information. They do not tell us who is like Lord Longford or what qualities or characteristics are attributed to Lord Longford.truthordare (talk) 17:58, 17 September 2017 (UTC)