Talk:David C. Pratt

Wow you're tough .. I had only started writing the article 30 minutes ago. At any rate, here are my points below

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This article provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject. (July 2016) '''Article is about an apparently successful businessman who runs a major U.S. corporation ... what additional context is needed?'''

This article may require copy editing for grammar, style, cohesion, tone, or spelling. (July 2016) ... '''I'm a professional journalist ... is it now clean enough?'''

This article's lead section may not adequately summarize key points of its contents. (July 2016) ... '''Again, he's an apparently successful businessman who runs a major U.S. corporation ... what additional summary do you require? ''' This article includes a list of references, but its sources remain unclear because it has insufficient inline citations. (July 2016) ... '''I'll work on inline cites, but there are multiple references to major U.S. publications. Again, I just started the article'''

This article reads like a news release, or is otherwise written in a promotional tone. (July 2016) ... I don't think it reads like a news release. GrandLake editor (talk) 19:23, 3 July 2016 (UTC)