Talk:David Cregeen

Hi, I've created article and warning of adviretisement and verification has been added. I removed some of the information that could be associated,though warning still on the page, so could anyone help me to find out which phrase appears to be adviretisement and which does need to citationEmrahzorlu2 (talk) 17:15, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
 * I've attempted to weed out the promotional tone, but edits to use the article as a sort of advertisement persist. The maintenance templates, alas, are still warranted. JNW (talk) 17:38, 5 November 2013 (UTC)