Talk:David E. I. Pyott

Edit request to update information
I'm working with David Pyott to update the article, and am posting this request to follow connected editing guidelines. I'm going to describe the requested updates and changes, and will show the before and after versions using the textdiff template. I'll then place the code and references at the bottom of the request. This method seems to make it easiest on other editors to understand the request. Thanks in advance for reviewing and helping. This list refers to the numbers in parenthesis in the right side textdiff box below. The box text shows the reference numbers for the ref list below. (1) sourcing the end of Pyott's tenure as a member of the board of Allergan ✅ (2) sourcing the end of Pyott's tenure as a member of the board of Avery Dennison ✅ (3) updating Pyott's position at the Ophthalmology Foundation, and correcting the name of the organization ✅ (4) updating his title to president with the Foundation of the American Academy of Ophthalmology ✅ (5) removing his roles with Retina Global and the American Glaucoma Society Foundation ✅ (6) removed Avery Dennison and Bioniz, and added Pliant ✅ (7) updated his positions at London Business School and Caltech ✅ (8) added his role as Hospitaller of the priory for the order of St. John. ✅
 * I marked the above changes done. For future reference, for board positions I removed, I checked the current boards to make sure Pyott's name wasn't listed anymore,  The Bioniz link is dead so there's nothing to check.  STEM info  (talk) 07:17, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Please add these two items to the Honor and awards section. I'm including the other awards from the section to show where they go chronologically. I'm also adding a better source for the CBE award, item #1 on the list. It's ref#69 below. The references unfortunately don't show up in the textdiff boxes:

MMMindp (talk) 17:09, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
 * ✅ STEM info  (talk) 03:56, 27 June 2024 (UTC)