Talk:David Fletcher (baseball)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 11:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)

Hello ! I'll complete a review within a week. -Riley1012 (talk) 11:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi . I apologize for the delay. I'm about to have final exams and underestimated how much work I still have left. I will do to review this weekend. Thanks! -Riley1012 (talk) 16:26, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

1. Well-written
 * "Fletcher was born in Orange, California and attended..." comma is needed after a state's name when the sentence continues
 * Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
 * "...and was awarded as the WCC Defensive Player of the Year." This wording is awkward. Change to "was named the WCC Defensive Player of the Year"
 * Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
 * "Fletcher began the 2023 season with the Angels, but went just..." comma needs to be taken out after Angels
 * Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

2. Well-sourced Copyvio check good. Spot check of refs 2, 9, 21, 27, 35, 50, and 55 looks good.
 * Ref 23 needs more information in its citation (including the website name and access date)
 * Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Ref 47 is a bare URL
 * Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Refs 6, 11, 24, 34, 36, and 39 all need access dates
 * Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

Other
 * "Fletcher has received endorsement deals from Budweiser, Bank of America, and New Balance." This should either be expanded and made into a new section (public image or something like that) or moved into the player profile section. Endorsement deals aren't a part of someone's personal life.
 * Moved to player profile section. Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

Article is neutral, stable, and all images are free and relevant.

Only a few changes needed to be made, well done! -Riley1012 (talk) 13:59, 22 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi @Riley1012, I've made the requested changes. Let me know if any issues remain. Sewageboy (talk) 05:24, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks, looks good. -Riley1012 (talk) 12:31, 23 April 2023 (UTC)