Talk:David P. Sartor

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Needs cutting for redundancy
Some of this needs cutting. The "Honors" section repeats a good deal of stuff found earlier in the article. As it is, this article reads a little like a puff piece or vita reciting the composer's literal "dozens" of awards. Some of the biographical stuff is a bit much as well. Frankly, I'm not convinced that the average reader truly needs or wants to know all the details of Mr. Sartor's elementary school (!) and high school years. As for me, MEGO (My Eyes Glazed Over). NicholasNotabene (talk) 08:49, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

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