Talk:David Roitman/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Moswento (talk · contribs) 08:28, 16 September 2013 (UTC)


 * I'm willing to finally review this one, but note that the nominator and main contributor is on a long wikibreak until 2015. In case FallingGravity, or anybody else, would be willing to respond to my comments, I'll leave this open about a week, and post a full review if anyone's interested. Moswento talky 08:28, 16 September 2013 (UTC)
 * As the nominator is absent, and no-one else has stepped forward in the last week, I'm failing this nomination. I have not done a detailed review, but have noted some close paraphrasing concerns with footnotes 5 and 7. "noted for his clarity of rendition and his power of improvisation, while still maintaining an overall simplicity of expression." is copied near-verbatim from the source, for example. I would be happy to re-review if someone else wished to re-nominate at a future point. Moswento talky 12:57, 23 September 2013 (UTC)