Talk:David Segal (politician)

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David does it right.

There is also a David Segal at the Washington Post, who wrote an article about notability on Wikipedia. Jason McHuff 06:42, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

Several problems with this article
Poorly referenced, reads like a campaign ad; not encyclopedic. Needs a photo. The keeper of French yarn #7, Carbon Fiber division blah, blah, blah Let there be sites

Campaign ad?
This article, as I said above, reads like a campaign advertisement. I suggest it be completely rewritten for a chance at sounding encyclopedic. The keeper of French yarn #7, Carbon Fiber division blah, blah, blah Let there be sites —Preceding undated comment added 12:31, 16 May 2010 (UTC).
 * By all means, feel free to make improvements. I've removed some of the maintenance tags you added since 14 (in addition to multiple inline tags) is excessive and unhelpful.-- Beloved Freak  00:06, 17 May 2010 (UTC)

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