Talk:David Sheff

Commercial ad?
There is so much commercial advertising in this text it is breathtaking. I don't know where to start with neutralization. Just as hint: In a modestly (that is: normally) structured article, achievements, honors and awards are mentioned last, under a separate headline, but not in the introductory characterization WaldiR (talk) 16:14, 27 January 2019 (UTC)
 * You are right. I had moved that part out of the lead to a corresponding section, with a Peacock hat in it. Alexcalamaro (talk) 11:24, 5 April 2021 (UTC)