Talk:Dawn of the Dead (2004 film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MyCatIsAChonk (talk · contribs) 18:02, 27 December 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this, expect it to be done in the next few days. -MyCatIsAChonk (talk) 18:11, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking this review. I made some expansions as well as pared the plot down to 636 words, so please check to see if these changes still satisfy the "well written" criterion. Furthermore, some of the offline sources cited—such as FNs 8 and 22—can be accessed on YouTube if you must check their verifiability; just search them on that site by typing in the title. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 09:03, 28 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for fixing the plot; as for the YouTube videos, I suggest you link those within the citations; even if they are from YouTube, it's about what the content is, so linking videos to those citations would be helpful to readers. Thanks! -MyCatIsAChonk (talk) 17:09, 29 December 2022 (UTC)