Talk:DayZ (mod)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Shaun9876 (talk · contribs) 00:38, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion, the screenshot has one fundamental problem: I don't think it's actually well represenating for the gameplay. On Sept. 20 Canwin87 offered to provide a better one, but he still didn't. I guess I'll look for something better. --Niemti (talk) 19:59, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Second Opinion - Reading through this article, I was only looking for the elements the previous reviewer stated they were unsure about. The prose seems to meet GA standards and complies with the manual of style. I would note, however, that the reception section borders issues raised by editors before regarding the 'x said y, a said b' format. However, I would still say this article is at GA standards. I would like to see Niemti (or any other editor) source a better replacement of the ghillie suit picture that demonstrates gameplay a bit more (I believe it's a rendered production shot but I could be mistaken having never played DayZ or Arma2) -- Cabe  6403  (Talk•Sign) 09:59, 5 November 2012 (UTC)

Anyway I just fixed a lot of things (again). --Niemti (talk) 19:49, 5 November 2012 (UTC)