Talk:Day of the Jackanapes/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GRAPPLE   X  22:36, 24 August 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Since Queenieacoustic has been inactive for a few weeks I went ahead and fixed the problems. I removed the mention of the executives reconstituting themselves from the Plot section since that's not an important part of the storyline. Thanks for the review! Theleftorium (talk) 16:27, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. Was going to fix it myself if I hadn't heard back within the week, so you've saved me the effort. :P Ready to pass this one now. Well done both of you, then. GRAPPLE   X  17:40, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Since Queenieacoustic has been inactive for a few weeks I went ahead and fixed the problems. I removed the mention of the executives reconstituting themselves from the Plot section since that's not an important part of the storyline. Thanks for the review! Theleftorium (talk) 16:27, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. Was going to fix it myself if I hadn't heard back within the week, so you've saved me the effort. :P Ready to pass this one now. Well done both of you, then. GRAPPLE   X  17:40, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Since Queenieacoustic has been inactive for a few weeks I went ahead and fixed the problems. I removed the mention of the executives reconstituting themselves from the Plot section since that's not an important part of the storyline. Thanks for the review! Theleftorium (talk) 16:27, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. Was going to fix it myself if I hadn't heard back within the week, so you've saved me the effort. :P Ready to pass this one now. Well done both of you, then. GRAPPLE   X  17:40, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. Was going to fix it myself if I hadn't heard back within the week, so you've saved me the effort. :P Ready to pass this one now. Well done both of you, then. GRAPPLE   X  17:40, 26 August 2011 (UTC)