Talk:Dayana Yastremska/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Will review this person. MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Delink Ukrainian per MOS:OVERLINK
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:40, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink WTA Tour
 * Not done because it's repetitive with linking Women's Tennis Association. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:40, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Early life and background

 * "Dayana Yastremska was born on 15 May 2000 to Marina and Alexander Yastremsky in Odessa, the third-largest city in Ukraine" - The WTA Tennis biography source in the infobox can be used to verify Yastremska's birth date and birth place
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:43, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Her father had been a volleyball player and also has served on the Odessa City Council." - the text in bold can be removed
 * I included it because I'm sure he is no longer a volleyball player, but not certain whether he still serves on the council (hence the "has" instead of "had"). Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:43, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "After also trying other sports such as gymnastics and swimming," - "also" is unneeded
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:43, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "She entered her first tournament when she was seven and finished in third place, despite the tournament" - close repetition of "tournament"
 * Changed to "event". Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:43, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Junior career

 * A thought: perhaps state what the exact names of the Grade tournaments were or where they took place?
 * Added the countries for the higher-level events. Names wouldn't be so recognizable at this level. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:46, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Yastremska closed out her junior career" - concluded
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk)

2015–17: Five ITF titles, first WTA match win

 * The first mention of No. should be converted to read as No.
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:47, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink the first mention of the term wild card to Wild card (sports)
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:47, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "This runner-up brought her into the top 200" - This runner-up finish
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:47, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

2018: Maiden WTA title and top 100 debut at 18

 * "After injuring her ankle at the Abierto Mexicano in February," - not mentioned by the ITF source. Please find a reference that explicitly states this fact
 * Added. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:50, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "and lost in qualifying at Wimbledon." - should be either in the qualifying stages or in the qualifying tournament
 * Changed to qualifying competition (the standard wording). Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:50, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

2019: Two WTA titles, world No. 22

 * "however, she began to struggle and only won one match" - won a single match
 * Changed to "only tallied one match win". ("single match" creates confusion with "singles match") Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:56, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "six tournaments in part due to playing through an ankle injury.[27][2]" - refs should be in numerical order
 * Fixed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:56, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "After a quarterfinal at the Hobart International,"- quarterfinal appearance
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:56, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "a quarterfinal at the Wuhan Open." - reached the quarterfinal
 * I think the usage of the comma with that part of the sentence is correct. ("her best Premier 5 result of the year, a quarterfinal at the Wuhan Open") Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:56, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "She partner with Jeļena Ostapenko at the Premier Mandatory China Open" - typo; should be partnered
 * Fixed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:56, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

2020: First Premier final

 * "During the event, she defeated three top 20 players, including No. 12 Aryna Sabalenka," - not mentioned by Tennis.com so another source is needed to verify this portion of information
 * Added list of matches as a source. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:58, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

National representation

 * "Ukraine lost the tie after losing the first singles rubber" - repetition of lost/losing
 * Changed the second one to "failing to win". Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:00, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "the latter of which in a third-set tiebreak." - which was in
 * Added "ended". Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:00, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Playing style

 * "and can hit large numbers of winners." - a vast amount of winners.
 * Changed to "high". ("Numbers" is plural because it refers to hitting a high number of winners in multiple matches.) Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:03, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Yastremska was regarded as the most aggressive player on the WTA Tour," - regarded by whom?
 * Changed to "ranked" (by the Aggression Score statistic). Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:03, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "having led the tour with 28.6% of her shots ending in a winner," - the symbol should be replaced with the word percent per MOS:PERCENT
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:03, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Coaches

 * "she has trained in Istanbul with Gavin Hopper" - the text in bold should be written in the past tense
 * I'm not sure whether she has stopped training in Istanbul. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:04, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * You don't need to have Sascha Bajin linked since he is already linked in the previous section
 * Removed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:04, 1 March 2020 (UTC)