Talk:Days of Wine and D'oh'ses/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:47, 9 September 2019 (UTC)

Comments
 * Where is the production code (infobox) referenced?
 * The external link: "Days of Wine and D'oh'ses episode capsule". The Simpsons Archive.


 * "Barney becoming sober because they did not think a sober Barney would be funny" bit repetitive with Barney and sober being used twice in quick succession.
 * Reworded


 * Same for " critics, including Chris Turner, have also criticized "...
 * Reworded


 * I don't think it's appropriate to part-link a quote as you have with the blackboard gag.
 * Fixed the quote


 * Two paras starting with "Meanwhile..." is repetitive.
 * Fixed


 * "new bike" bicycle?
 * Fixed


 * " leaving them in" placing them in. Or putting them in...
 * Putting them


 * "to do an " feels clumsy, to write an, to create an...?
 * Fixed


 * "He told the idea to Lacusta," -> "He told Lacusta of the idea"
 * Fixed


 * Our article on showrunner has it as a single word.
 * Showrunner is one word


 * "Alone Again, Natura-diddly" should have a capital D.
 * Fixed


 * Are there any viewing figures available?
 * Fixed


 * " have commented on Barney becoming sober. IGN staff members commented i" comment is quick-repeated...
 * Fixed


 * Prism Awards (prose) or PRISM Awards (ref).
 * Faxed

Short and sweet, hence only a handful of reasonably straightforward comments, so I'll put it on hold while we deal with them. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:56, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Issues solved. AmericanAir88(talk) 20:12, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Article passed. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 20:32, 11 September 2019 (UTC)