Talk:Dazzle camouflage/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 13:25, 27 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Many thanks for taking this on. I'll respond promptly. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:42, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

Prose

 * Inconsistent: "p.89 and p. 89"
 * Added spaces where missing. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:59, 27 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Duplicate links to Winston Churchill, Royal Navy, periscope, Admiralty, and kamikaze
 * Removed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:59, 27 July 2015 (UTC)


 * First note doesn't make sense.
 * Made use of note in text. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:47, 27 July 2015 (UTC)


 * "Art history" should be relabeled "Arts"
 * Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:47, 27 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Expand the contractions in the article
 * Done any that might be tricky; "HMS", "USS" and "SS" are usual in ship articles, hope that's all right: can add notes if desired. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:52, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
 * I meant to expand the contraction "don't".--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 15:19, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Aha. There's one in a comment, now expanded, and one in an article title, left alone. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:29, 27 July 2015 (UTC)