Talk:De Lackner HZ-1 Aerocycle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:00, 28 May 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I am reviewing this article and in general it seems fine. I made a few copy edits, for example de Lackner is De Lackner when it begins a sentence. There are only a few comments:


 * Does this source have all the information attributed to it? http://www.transchool.eustis.army.mil/museum/transportation%20museum/delackner.htm and is it reliable?
 * I double-checked to be sure I hadn't let "reference creep" set in, it should cover everything attributed. As for being a RS, it is the official website of the United States Army Transportation Museum and, I would think, should be as reliable as any other official U.S. Military/U.S. Government site.


 * Design
 * "De Lackner's proposed concept" - as the lead is supposed to be a summary of the article, who or what De Lackner is should be explained here.
 * Done.


 * Otherwise, it looks good!
 * Thanks! - The Bushranger Return fire Flank speed 00:20, 29 May 2010 (UTC)

Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:00, 28 May 2010 (UTC)


 * I added a bit to the lead. Xtzou ( Talk ) 12:38, 29 May 2010 (UTC)

 GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk ) 12:38, 29 May 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality: Clearly and concisely  written
 * B. MoS compliance: Complies with required elements of the  MoS
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources: Reliable sources
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Well referenced
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects: Sets the context
 * B. Focused: Remains focused on the topic
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Awesome. Thanks much! - The Bushranger Return fire Flank speed 13:26, 29 May 2010 (UTC)