Talk:Deadalive/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 20:47, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

Will review soon.  Ruby  2010/  2013  20:47, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * "...after Mile's body..." -> Miles'
 * "Doggett realizes that if he leaves, the office will be closed since Scully will so be going on maternity leave" Needs rephrasing
 * Input actor name for Billy Miles? (for consistency)
 * No need for hospital wikilink (common word); same with shower
 * later reveals... later reveals (2 sentences in a row; could use a little switching up)
 * "many felt that the season would be the shows last" -> show's last
 * Photo double or stunt double?
 * Critical Myth is a website and has no print equivalent (as a far as a I know), so it should not be italicized. Same for BBC
 * I don't quite understand the Television Without Pity review comment. What picture? (One of Duchovny)?
 * Love the Fringe send out! :) Not surprised this one beat out "Unearthed," it certainly sounds cooler (and the Fringe episode was pretty crucified by critics). I may have to integrate that UGO article into some Fringe pages
 * Looking again at the source, I don't think your summary really conveys what the article says ("Deadalive" only beats out the Fringe episode because of the "emotional reunion at the end". The reviewer said they "both kind of suck") ;)  Ruby  2010/  2013  21:23, 18 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Ref 4: Is the August date a retrieval date?

Otherwise, looks good. Will place on hold while above comments get addressed. Thanks,  Ruby  2010/  2013  21:19, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
 * OK, I believe I've cleaned up everything. As for the prose errors and inconsistencies, most of them I just cleared up or removed so to prevent ambiguity. Thank you for reviewing!--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:46, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good, but the last comment still needs to be addressed.  Ruby  2010/  2013  03:40, 19 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Whoops, sorry. I always seem to miss one thing. Fixed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 00:34, 20 March 2012 (UTC)
 * No worries. Passing the article. Nice work!  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:45, 20 March 2012 (UTC)