Talk:Death Has a Shadow/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 16:16, 19 April 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I am reviewing this article. I have copy edited it for prose problems. However some remain:
 * "The movie Peter and his friends is a reference to the 1942 American romantic drama Casablanca." - there must be some words missing.
 * Ref 30 is a dead link: http://bobspoetry.com/Bobs02Mr.pdf
 * I don't see where ref 23 references the relevant material " Chabert left the series due to time constraints with her acting role in Party of Five, as well as schoolwork."
 * What is the full reference: Callaghan, pp. 14-17? The full information should be provided. Callaghan links to Death Has a Shadow but I don't understand why.

I will put the article on hold for seven days. Xtzou ( Talk ) 16:16, 19 April 2010 (UTC)

Most of the things are done. -- Pedro J. the rookie 23:07, 19 April 2010 (UTC)

Ok. Thanks! Xtzou ( Talk ) 23:34, 19 April 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused: }
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Good work! Xtzou ( Talk ) 23:34, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Good work! Xtzou ( Talk ) 23:34, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Good work! Xtzou ( Talk ) 23:34, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Good work! Xtzou ( Talk ) 23:34, 19 April 2010 (UTC)