Talk:Death and immortality in Middle-earth/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


 * A couple duplinks found using the tool.
 * Fixed.


 * "by fighting" Fighting who or what?
 * Enemies of any description in the Norse myths.


 * "evil characters" you could just say "antagonists".
 * Not the same thing, nor does it really apply to Gollum, for instance.


 * "to a fiery end" considering the next clause, this should be "to a fiery end in LOTR" to have a consistent pattern.
 * Added.


 * "Medieval" you used the spelling Mediaeval in an earlier article, I'm not really sure which is more common in British English.
 * -ie- has become more common now (and it saves our American friends from constantly "correcting" it, too).


 * "Boromir, Denethor, Gollum, Saruman, Sauron, Théoden" why no links for all of these?
 * Linked Théoden; the others are all linked above.


 * Really nothing else in the prose that I can pick apart.
 * Noted.


 * The images are all licensed and used correctly.
 * Noted.


 * The references are all reliable and formatted correctly.
 * Noted.


 * Spotchecks:
 * Dalfonzo, Gina (2007). "Humble Heroism: Frodo Baggins as Christian Hero in The Lord of the Rings". In Pursuit of Truth. Verifies all claims made.
 * Bedell, Haley (2015). "Frodo Baggins: The Modern Parallel to Christ in Literature" (PDF). Humanities Capstone Projects. Pacific University (Paper 24). Verifies all claims made.
 * Stucky, Mark (Summer 2006). "Middle Earth's Messianic Mythology Remixed: Gandalf's Death and Resurrection in Novel and Film" (PDF). Journal of Religion and Popular Culture. Verifies all claims made.
 * Shippey, Tom (2005). "Another road to Middle-earth: Jackson's movie trilogy". In Isaacs, Neil D.; Zimbardo, Rose A. (eds.). Understanding the Lord of the Rings: The Best of Tolkien Criticism. Verifies all claims made.
 * Noted.


 * Really nice article overall, that's all I have. AryKun (talk) 14:31, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
 * All done to date. Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:09, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Alright, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 09:32, 27 July 2023 (UTC)