Talk:Death in Bloom/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hmlarson (talk · contribs) 03:55, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Hello, I have begun the review and will be posting feedback below. As issues are addressed, please add a note indicating your changes to the relevant item listed below. Thank you. Hmlarson (talk) 02:48, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Comment
Overall, this is a well-written article that meets all of the criteria for a Good Article. I made a few minor copy edits summarized below.

Lead

 * I wikified storyboarded. Hmlarson (talk) 03:55, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Plot

 * I made some minor copy edits to this section. Hmlarson (talk) 03:55, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Production

 * I made some minor copy edits to this section. Hmlarson (talk) 03:55, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Review checklist

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * A well-written article. I had a few suggested copy edits listed above that I ended up making myself.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * n/a
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * n/a
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: