Talk:Death of Brian Sicknick/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:18, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 20:18, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * In the infobox: "US" "U.S."
 * Birthdate needs a source (either in infobox or lead).
 * Lead summarizes the article so that's in good shape.

Early life and career

 * Remove the commas after "study electronics" and "2016 presidential election".
 * Everything is sourced so I couldn't find any other issues in this section.

Storming of the Capitol

 * Every word in "first responder unit" should be capitalized.
 * "were charged" "was charged"
 * Recite sources at the end of each quote per WP:CITE.
 * "they are" "they're"
 * Shouldn't we avoid contractions as per MOS:CONTRACTIONS? Edge3 (talk) 03:48, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I guess we should. Thanks for the link!

Homicide investigation

 * Link CNN.
 * CNN actually says that it was "the DC Metropolitan Police Department's homicide branch".
 * Move the reference after "murder" to the end of the sentence it is in.

Memorials and funeral

 * This section looks good (no issues).

References and other comments

 * Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from The Washington Post with "|url-access=limited".
 * CBS New York WCBS-TV
 * New York Times The New York Times
 * Washington Post The Washington Post
 * Try to be consistent whether or not to italicize certain sources such as CNN.
 * Sources are all already archived.
 * Optional, but try linking websites in each reference.
 * I'm not sure what you mean. Could you please clarify this suggestion? Edge3 (talk) 03:48, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * For example, if a reference is from The New York Times, link it with " |website=The New York Times ".

Progress
Thanks for your suggestions! I think I've addressed most of them, and left comments for two items that I had questions about. Let me know if I missed anything on your list, or if there are other suggestions that you have! Edge3 (talk) 03:48, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the quick reply. I have responded to both of your comments above.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 11:42, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Anyway, since most of my main suggestions have already been addressed, I'm passing the article.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 12:18, 19 March 2021 (UTC)