Talk:Death of Cleopatra/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
 * I eagerly but patiently await your review and critique of the article. Regards, Pericles of Athens  Talk 19:15, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅ (20% is highest, due to phrase similarities)
 * 3a
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * occurred on either the 10 or 12 August 30 BC in I believe the the should be removed, as 10 or 12 August makes more sense unless it is changed to 10th or 12th.
 * while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon are more tepid by stating it was circa 12 August. suggest while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon state it was c. 12 August.
 * Charmion adjusting her diademed crown before she herself fell suggest Charmion adjusting Cleopatra's diademed crown before she herself fell
 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. I apologize for taking so long. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  02:21, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

Pericles' comments
has the review started? I can't tell. Is there something I should do right away? I guess it's good to know that there are no dead links or missing citations. Pericles of Athens Talk 13:50, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Apologies on the delays, I've been busy IRL. I'll try my best to start/finish the other reviews within the week. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  04:06, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
 * are you still busy? Pericles of Athens  Talk 14:42, 17 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Apologies for the long wait, I should have time now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:41, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
 * excellent! I have amended the article according to your prose suggestions. Best wishes, Pericles of Athens  Talk 02:26, 23 April 2018 (UTC)