Talk:Death of Khaled Mohamed Saeed/to do


 * Expand with Talk:Death of Khaled Mohamed Saeed/Sources
 * Give brief background on Emergency Law and Police Brutality (see 2011 Egyptian revolution)
 * Add basic biographical data about Saeed, it would be interesting to know where (what town or city) he was born, whether he had siblings, what he did for a living.
 * Death section: Fix The blockquote should be in ordinary type, not italics. I'd recommend the blockquote format rather than the improvised format in the existing article. MOS:QUOTE explains how the blockquotes work.
 * The blockquote and all other quotations in the article need inline citations placed directly after the punctuation at the end of the quotes.
 * 'Aftermath section: To make room for the image, I'd consider deleting the subhead, "Protests" and merging all of the material under the main head, "Aftermath".
 * Add section on the Trial: the Egyptian government consented to a trial for the two detectives".  Great coverage available at DailyNewsEgypt.com among other places.