Talk:Deaths of Christianne and Robert Shepherd

POV
This seems to be focused on blaming the tour group operator, with quotations selected to be hostile to them both before and subsequent to the deaths. All of it is in reported excessive tabloid-style detail, eg. "The next day, Fankhauser had a three-hour meeting with the children's parents." The article is not primarily about their deaths. Its about the way the tour operator responded to it. Essentially, its advocacy. POV is the usual tag, but I agree it isn't exact. I've restored it, and ,since I consider that this page in its current form is a violation of the rules against attack pages, I am considering listing it for speedy deletion as such, but in view of the likely opposition to the removal of tabloid-style articles, I might decide to go directly to afd. . You might want to see if some editing would help, such as removing the pathetic adjectives,  the tone of advocacy,   the detail of events, and  especially the detailed account of each of the company's statements in favor of a summary. An article about 1/3 the length would seem to have some chance of being encyclopedic.  DGG ( talk ) 04:51, 27 September 2021 (UTC)