Talk:Debra Solomon

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Hi!

The information you presented on Solomon was well written, clear, and concise. Breaking up the "Career" section into small paragraphs was smart because it creates a better flow. However, citations are needed the the first paragraph. It would also be useful to find some purely biographical information to put in the "Biography" section (where she is from, when we was born, etc.). I would also try and find some additional information about one of her major works have a section dedicated to it. All in all, good work!

Laracrafty (talk) 18:07, 8 November 2016 (UTC)

Hey there

Really like the article was well written and the focus on her career was great. The information provided in Career was comprehensive and a really good telling of what she's done however, there are some stuff in Biography such as the section about her film festivals that may be better suite din the Career section, versus biography. Also, it may be worth looking into different places to get information than Debra's own website, such as some secondary possibly unaffiliated sources, to provide some information about her for citation and credibility sources. The filmography/ awards and nominations sections are very information and have lots of information on her. They are also well dated and linked to make it easy to find the films. Overall, really great article! - rojopastel — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rojopastel (talk • contribs) 00:27, 10 November 2016 (UTC)