Talk:Decade of Aggression/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:26, 31 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * File:SlayerDOA.JPG is far too big
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)
 * When you reduced non-free media, please add to the page. Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:19, 1 January 2011 (UTC)


 * "and executive produced by Richard Kimball" - not mentioned later
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)


 * "Three of the album's tracks were included in the box set Soundtrack to the Apocalypse." - not mentioned later
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)

Conception

 * "on October 22, 1991, almost a month after Nirvana's Nevermind." - what does this have to do with Nevermind?
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)


 * "to give them time to decide what their next album's style would be." - the link of "style" it music genre is a bit WP:EASTEREGG, as style and genre can be a bit different. If you mean genre, just say genre.
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)


 * "one hour, twenty-five (eighty-five) minutes, and twenty-eight seconds" - confusing. Either remove bracketed info or say 'one hour, twenty-five minutes, and twenty-eight seconds (85:28)', or similar
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)

Reception

 * The second paragraph has a strange tense, and is inconsistent. Cover all to past tense.
 * Fixed (I think). Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)


 * "The album would chart on four different charts" – there are only three
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Source?
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)

Credits

 * Source?
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Please split into two columns
 * Done. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Jobs/tasks should be in lowercase
 * Fixed. Crowz  RSA  19:19, 31 December 2010 (UTC)