Talk:Deep, Deep Trouble/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 22:35, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Happy to offer a review- your articles are always excellent. J Milburn (talk) 22:35, 3 July 2012 (UTC)


 * "The song was written by The Simpsons creator Matt Groening and DJ Jazzy Jeff,[2] and produced by DJ Jazzy Jeff and John Boylan."
 * "after "Do the Bartman".[8][9]" Worth a mention how successful this one was? On an article this short, we can afford to have a few little details
 * Typically, details about music videos go above charting history. I can certainly see the argument for doing it differently here.
 * "the Simpsons shorts that" Italics?
 * A quick, couple of line synopsis of the music video would be great
 * Sources seem completely appropriate and reliable. I'd lose the italics on the website names (the lack of page numbers on some references is annoying, but acceptable at GA level)
 * While I can't see a screenshot or a music sample being too useful here, as the lyrics are what is focussed upon, perhaps a sample of the lyrics? In a quotebox, perhaps?
 * The lead is a tiny bit choppy- could it perhaps be smoothed out for a better flow?

Not the greatest article ever, I'm sure you'll admit, but you've done very well to pull together all these sources and produce the article you have. Nice work! J Milburn (talk) 22:50, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Heh, yeah this isn't one of my best creations ;-) but the sources used in the article are all that I have found, despite searching Google, Google News, Google Books, Newsbank, and Highbeam. Anyway, I've fixed your issues + made some other improvements and I think the article is much better now. As always thanks for a great review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 10:12, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Great improvements. I'm happy to promote this one now. J Milburn (talk) 15:21, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Theleftorium (talk) 16:46, 5 July 2012 (UTC)