Talk:Deeper Christian Life Ministry

Cleanup tag
I just added the general cleanup tag to this article. Some things in the article that I think need cleanup are:
 * tone/style ("How It All Begun!", "A Man With a Great Heart For God!", "He is not tall, and does not have a larger-than-life character. He does not dominate, nor has he accrued power to himself. He walks slowly, is relaxed, and has a gentle sense of humour with a warm smile and a twinkle in his eyes. He dresses simply, eats simply... and... could have assumed titles to himself." etc)
 * wikification: there are few links in the article
 * references/citations need to be formatted properly
 * unnecessary trivia bits should be deleted or minimised (ie. stay on topic better)

- Iotha 21:51, 12 August 2007 (UTC)

Article needs to be re-written
This article has been substandard since its creation in 2006.
 * There are no reliable sources.
 * The article is written like an advert
 * The article contains loads of peacock terms.
 * There are no pictures in the article.

In comparison, check out the wikipedia pages of other so-called mega-churches. Could someone please wikify/cleanup or best: rewrite this article? Thank you.Amsaim (talk) 14:59, 23 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I've started to rewrite the article. Amsaim (talk) 10:33, 28 February 2011 (UTC)

"Doctrines"
This section is useless, as it doesn't say what those doctrines are, and the links are worse, as they imply you will find out what DCLM teaches but take you to general articles. I suggest this section be filled in with content or deleted.--Richardson mcphillips (talk) 13:37, 11 September 2017 (UTC)