Talk:Delhi War Cemetery/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: FR30799386 (talk · contribs) 11:31, 20 December 2018 (UTC)


 * I will take on the review this article. Regards. — fr&thinsp;+  11:31, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
 * ,during the course of the review I will go over the prose of the article, its compliance with Wikipedia's in-house manual of style, and the reliablility of the sources provided. I will list all flaws major or minor in the Improvements section of this GA review. If you need clarification regarding any point, please me to this page. I will respond within 48 hours. Regards. — fr&thinsp;+  17:55, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
 * , I think you should put the article at WP:GOCE/R. I think it needs some serious copy-editing. After the CE is finished (should take about a month to reach the top) we can continue from there. In the meantime, after you fix the outstanding concern I'll put this review on hold.
 * , I've submitted this article for copy-editing. Thanks. DiplomatTesterMan (talk) 15:22, 24 December 2018 (UTC)
 * The copy edit by WP:GOCE/R is done. Regards DiplomatTesterMan (talk) 23:59, 9 January 2019 (UTC)


 * I would like to withdraw this GA nomination. As per GA nominations instructions, step 3, I would request you to fail this GA Nomination. Regards. DiplomatTesterMan (talk) 08:02, 30 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I am sorry to see this happen. If you ever want to continue get this article to GA status, feel free to ping me, and we'll continue the review from where I left off. Regards. << FR (mobileUndo) 13:39, 30 January 2019 (UTC)

Lede

 * Change Delhi War Cemetery contains the war graves.... to The Delhi War Cemetery is a cemetery and memorial located in the Delhi Cantonment, India. It contains the war graves.....
 * Done DiplomatTesterMan (talk) 20:26, 23 December 2018 (UTC)

Cemetery

 * WP:SEAOFBLUE at the end of first paragraph needs to be fixed.
 * Done DiplomatTesterMan (talk) 08:58, 29 December 2018 (UTC)


 * The sentence referenced above and the sentence before that will need major restructuring and reincorporation....As it reads right now it is almost in a list separated by commas format.
 * Where possible replace the database entries with citations from scholarly sources (such as those which you listed in the bibliography section)[assuming you have access to the sources].

Infobox

 * Add a proper
 * Done DiplomatTesterMan (talk) 20:26, 23 December 2018 (UTC)