Talk:Deli Mike/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:33, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

Just some copy fixes and alt text and you're good to go. Didn't expect a GA on an individual plane, but here we are! 7-day hold for. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:52, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * In late 1980s "In the late 1980s"
 * "phased-out" should not be hyphenated
 * Change contraction "would've" to "would have"
 * option for further five "option for a further five"
 * Frequent problems with the aircraft include the reading light of a completely different passenger turning on when the button is pressed and the same issue also exists with the button used to call a crew member Add comma after "pressed". More: User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences
 * re-configured and lay-out remove dashes
 * There were initial speculations — "There was initial speculation"; this is not plural in English
 * "sistership" is not one word in English, but the claim from [5] does check out that three other A340s from the order were used as restaurants and venues. I'd say "as had previously happened to three sister aircraft".
 * The technicians also removed and re-installed all systems, and reset — another commas in sentences info, drop this comma. also, "reinstalled", no hyphen
 * when many others are grounded — maybe "were" grounded? there's definitely a tense issue here
 * ✅; also replaced "when" with "while".
 * Bora Erdin of pro-opposition newspaper Sözcü also added that the airline made "no clarification as to why the problematic plane [Deli Mike] was used persistently while unproblematic ones were on the ground", and pointed out to the frequent issue of the landing gear not retracting after take-off, causing the aircraft to return to the origin airport. Several items:
 * Remove comma after the quote (another commas in sentences issue)
 * "and pointed out to" might be better parsed as "and highlighted"
 * Takeoff is one word
 * The technicians also removed and re-installed all systems, and reset — another commas in sentences info, drop this comma. also, "reinstalled", no hyphen
 * when many others are grounded — maybe "were" grounded? there's definitely a tense issue here
 * ✅; also replaced "when" with "while".
 * Bora Erdin of pro-opposition newspaper Sözcü also added that the airline made "no clarification as to why the problematic plane [Deli Mike] was used persistently while unproblematic ones were on the ground", and pointed out to the frequent issue of the landing gear not retracting after take-off, causing the aircraft to return to the origin airport. Several items:
 * Remove comma after the quote (another commas in sentences issue)
 * "and pointed out to" might be better parsed as "and highlighted"
 * Takeoff is one word
 * "and pointed out to" might be better parsed as "and highlighted"
 * Takeoff is one word
 * Takeoff is one word
 * Takeoff is one word

Source spot checks
I do not speak or read Turkish, so sources are being run through Google Translate to check. The four I chose do check out.


 * [5] Use of sister aircraft as restaurants: Checks out to source.
 * [7] Checks out for fleet overhaul/temporary grounding of some aircraft after a fall in demand
 * [10] Removal of livery
 * [11] Ferrying to Johannesburg

Other issues

 * References are archived.
 * Earwig has no issues whatsoever, owing to the exclusively non-English sourcing.
 * Images outside of the infobox need alt text. They all have permission or are otherwise freely licensed.
 * alt texts, only couldn't find anything the first one so it's now.


 * addressed the issues. ~Styyx Talk ? 11:19, 10 August 2022 (UTC)