Talk:Delphian Club

Overly detailed
You added Template:Overly detailed on this article today. Since the article is fairly short and I wrote it myself from scratch recently, I hope we can quickly develop a consensus here on how to resolve that issue you raised. What content in the article do you think is overly detailed? Dugan Murphy (talk) 20:54, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

1. the quotations-- perhaps the first 2 are sufficient 2. the list of members, wwhich is large part reproduces the sections on membership and organization. Doing it one way or another is sufficient.

In addition, the full name is used too often-- most of the time it should be "the club" (lower case), and "Delphinian A.B" should just be A.B., when it's clear from previous content that he's a member. .

It's an extremely nice essay and I congratulate you for it. --the only problem is to make it look more like a Wikipedia article,.  DGG ( talk ) 22:17, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the detail! I removed the block quotes after the first two, removed the prose text that duplicates information in the table, uncapitalized "club" where appropriate, and removed the extraneous references to members as Delphians. That should take care of all the issues you raised, so I'm going to remove the Template:Overly detailed. Dugan Murphy (talk) 18:14, 8 September 2021 (UTC)