Talk:Delta hedging

This person "Wrp103" reverted my changes. Someone who knows something about this article, please fix the invalid grammar on the bottom. (See history.)
 * 1) ur) (last)  19:05, 3 April 2007 Wrp103 (Talk | contribs) (Revert to revision 87726989 dated 2006-11-14 09:13:45 by 170.148.96.104 using popups)
 * 2) (cur) (last) 02:37, 23 March 2007 18.243.2.30 (Talk) (→Delta hedging and option theory - [invalid grammar:] tag, please fix)

Just an observation. I've seen criticism of a lot of articles (the one on police comes to mind) in which nit-pickers complain that the article is POV because it uses the terminology of the police. If that's so, what does that make this article? It may "explain" delta hedging to the already informed, but it's, pardon the expression, Greek to the untutored--and thyerefore worthless. Get it out of the text-book and into understandable concepts.--131.238.92.62 09:24, 17 April 2006 (UTC)
 * You may wish to add the tag confusing to the article and then explan on the talk page why it is not clear so that people familiar with the subject(not me) can edit it appropriately. --Dodo bird 09:40, 17 April 2006 (UTC)