Talk:Demons (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:22, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Issues:


 * Image: Unnecessary Image; also listed for deletion
 * I wouldn't call it unnecessary; the effects are discussed at length in the production section. I dropped a note on the deletion page pleading the case, so I'll keep it until consensus is reached.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  04:07, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox
 * Lede: Link episode to List of The X-Files episodes
 * Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
 * Lede: It premiered on the Fox network on May 11, 1997 → It premiered on the Fox network in the United States on May 11, 1997
 * Lede: Add UK airing, if there is source
 * Lede: It was written by R. W. Goodwin directed by Kim Manners. → It was written by R. W. Goodwin and directed by Kim Manners.
 * Lede: Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
 * Lede: people → viewers
 * Lede: Did Television Critics praised anything in particular, or note anything
 * Lede: Plot summary — Need much bigger plot summary at the lede section
 * Lede: Link executive producer
 * Production: Writing - Link executive producer
 * Production: Add "Casting" section, or just note the guest stars of the episode
 * I'm not sure this is really necessary. Only Chris Owens is mentioned in the book I cited, and that's only really a sentence. The rest would just yield a list, like the "Guest Stars" one in the Infobox, so It'd be redundant.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  04:07, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: Add television rating in the United States, if possible
 * I couldn't find this.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  04:07, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: It notes the channel in UK, but no US!, please add Fox network for the United States
 * Reception: "Demons" first aired → "Demons" was originally broadcast
 * Reception: 8 out of 10 an wrote. an → and
 * External links: Add episode link for the X-Files official website

On hold. TBrandley 02:35, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I addressed most of the issues. See my reasonings for the rest. Thanks for the review.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  04:07, 25 June 2012 (UTC)