Talk:Demosthenes/to do

Style


 * To expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD.
 * To improve photo captions.
 * To make sub-headings more informative.
 * To choose a consistent verb tense.

Copy-editing suggestions


 * To tighten the copy a little.
 * To direct the reader to daughter articles with more in-depth information on some topics.
 * To correct flowery language that's uncomfortably close to POV.
 * To take care of a number of terms which are unexplained.
 * To write or expand separate daughter articles on certain specific topics, and substantially shorten the sections on those topics in the Demosthenes articles.
 * To correct elegant variation — using pronouns, ellipses, and repetition when it's not tedious.