Talk:Denmark–Eritrea relations/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 10:18, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: none found.

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 10:33, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * The lead does not comply with WP:LEAD. The whole article should be summarised here.
 * Prose is stilted, poorly cast and contains elementary mistakes of grammar and spelling.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Appear to be reliable sources, assume good faith for Danish sources, could do with better consistency in publisher deatils, and langauge details (if not English).
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * It seems rather thin, fails the broadness of coverage criterion, if there isn't more then it can't really be a good article.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Appears one-sided - all about Denmark's position, little from the Eritrean pov.
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * stable
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * One licensed and tagged image form commons used
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * A fairly clearcut fail. there probably isn't enough matwerial to make this a good article ever.  The prose is poor, the lead is inadequate, the article focusses exclusively on Denmark's part in the relationship, there is nothing about Eritrea's part. Jezhotwells (talk) 10:37, 8 August 2011 (UTC)