Talk:Dennis Havig/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 17:15, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 17:15, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 17:40, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Add "(NFL)" to the lead.
 * Done.
 * There are a number of duplicate links in the body: lettered, senior, and linebacker
 * Removed.
 * Reference #3 mentions that he is Mormon, this may be notable enough to add to his bio somewhere
 * I was thinking it might be worth adding too; but I am unsure exactly how it should be worded – should we be saying in a personal life section "Havig is a Mormon" with the 1967 reference, or should we say something different or not list it since it is only known that he was a Mormon 50+ years ago?
 * Ref spot check: 6, 7, 12, 16, 21, 25, 27
 * BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:44, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Maybe you could say Havig was born on May 6, 1949, in Powell, Wyoming, and raised as a Mormon? « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 22:51, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Added. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:56, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 22:57, 30 October 2023 (UTC)