Talk:Deportation of Koreans in the Soviet Union/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Keresluna (talk · contribs) 17:17, 24 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments
Thanks for initiating this GA review. I will be here to answer any kind of questions related to this topic.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 07:20, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for letting me know! Keres🌑(talk • ctb) 20:24, 25 May 2021 (UTC)

Its not required but it would be good if the experience in exile was divided into subsections. Keres🌑(talk • ctb) 19:42, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
 * It could be done, but it is a small section, and I was just wondering what would those subsections be titled? Maybe something like "Arrival and distribution in kolkhozes", "Integration", "Death toll"?--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 06:26, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Those titles seem good. Sorry, I am not very good at this topic. Keres🌑(talk • ctb) 00:51, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ --3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 07:02, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Pass! But I noticed a grammar issue. At "...Koreans were at the time subjects of the Empire of Japan, which was Soviet Union's..." please add "the" between "was" and "Soviet". Keres🌑(talk • ctb) 21:46, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much, . I will correct the grammar issue.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 13:30, 29 May 2021 (UTC)