Talk:Der 100. Psalm/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:11, 28 August 2016 (UTC)

I will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 15:11, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
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History

 * "beginning on 24 April 1908 and working on it until the beginning of July that year." - worked
 * good catch, was kindly changed already --GA


 * "Part I was first performed on 31 July 1908 for the university anniversary." - university's anniversary
 * same --GA


 * Reger received an honorary doctorate from the Jena University. - honourary doctorate
 * done --GA


 * Remove the second wikilink of Leipzig
 * done --GA

Structure and scoring

 * "A short instrumental introduction, marked Andante sostenuto," - I think either marked by or marked in is more accurate
 * Sorry, but I have not seen that in six years of writing on classical compositions. --GA

Jauchzet

 * "The treatment of the line has been regarded as an "orchestral explosion"," - regarded by whom? Also the comma should be a period.
 * I will think about dropping it, because it may hold up the flow too much to explain. --GA
 * I tried now to say who, could add a date and location if wanted. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:30, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I think that would be unncessary. MWright96 (talk) 06:41, 29 August 2016 (UTC)


 * "marked sostenuto and pp." - same point as in the Structure and scoring section
 * same answer --GA


 * "marked espressivo und crescendo." - and
 * another good catch, thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:10, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

Erkennet

 * "with a solo violin picturing the "sheep of his pasture"." - needs a citation
 * will look, but don't immediately recall where I read that --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:12, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
 * found it --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:35, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

Gehet zu seinen Toren ein

 * "The key of F-sharp minor and a triple meter are intruduced by the orchestra." - typo
 * found it fixed already --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

Denn der Herr ist freundlich

 * "The climactic ending has been regarded as a "gloriously polychromatic form"." - regarded by whom?
 * same as above --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

Versions

 * "François Callebout wrote an organ version that was published in 2004 in by Dr. J. Butz." - remove the second instance of the word "in"
 * done --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:14, 29 August 2016 (UTC)