Talk:Der Deutsche Canadier/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:57, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * Could create plausible redirects at the alt names, e.g. The German Canadian and The German Canadian and News Messenger?
 * Done.


 * "only German language newspaper" hyphenate German-language for consistent usage.
 * Done.


 * "settlers from Germany.[3] " that links to the German Confederation which is very different to most of our understanding of "Germany".
 * I changed to "German settlers" and added an explanatory note explaining what "German" meant before the 1871 unification.


 * "German" or "Germany" appears seven times in three sentences there, it's quite repetitive.
 * Tried rewording things around.


 * "publications in Pennsylvania in the" overlinked.
 * Fixed.


 * "Oldenburg on " comma after Oldenburg.
 * Done.


 * "Pennsylvania in March" comma after Pennsylvania.
 * Done.


 * "one hundred forty friends, fifty one " 140, 51.
 * Done.


 * "son of Bishop and" why capital B?
 * Kalbfleisch 1968 capitalized it because it's a title, but I think per the MOS you're right and we ought to have it as a lowercase.


 * "lasted under two years" less than
 * Fixed.


 * "$2.00 per year or $3.00" inflate. And I assume this was CAN$?  So how much was that worth in a currency the rest of us are moderately more familiar with, e.g. US$ or GBP£?
 * I added inflation templates and clarified it's CA$. Do we need US$ or GBP£ equivalents? I'm worried about cluttering things up, but since the article is written in Canadian English I'm not sure if it's entirely necessary anyway.


 * "20 × 14 inch paper" convert to metric.
 * Added cm in parenthesis.


 * "22 × 16 " and the same (and for the others...)
 * Added cm in parenthesis.


 * Would be nice to have ISBNs in same format.
 * Is there any guidance in the MOS? I usually use the 10 digit ISBN if that's what was available on first publication and the 13 digit for newer stuff.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:54, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much ! I appreciate it.  Tkbrett  (✉) 21:22, 4 October 2021 (UTC)