Talk:Der Plan

let the revision begin!
I created the initial entry for this German New wave group by translating the article from German.

But I am not quite sure whether this English entry is described in a formal grammar.

If you find any grammatical mistakes, please revise it.

Thank you, T.Aita 16:14, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

Proof reader
Just proof-read the article. Mostly, your English grammar is very good ! :-)

Wasn't sure what to do with the second part of:

"The images on the sleeve were remarkably coordinated in black." as I'm not sure what you mean.

If you can explain a bit more what you mean, I can adjust it into natural English. thisisace 23:30, 16 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your proofreading!
 * The original German description of the sentence you cited above was:
 * > Auffällig ist das ganz in schwarz gehaltene Cover der LP.
 * I tried to depict a image of this eye-catching cover jacket:.
 * Could you please improve the expression of the current English article? T.Aita 05:58, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I tried to depict a image of this eye-catching cover jacket:.
 * Could you please improve the expression of the current English article? T.Aita 05:58, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Could you please improve the expression of the current English article? T.Aita 05:58, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Could you please improve the expression of the current English article? T.Aita 05:58, 17 June 2007 (UTC)


 * I have now seen a picture of the record sleeve. With your description, I have changed it to:
 * "The sleeve is very eye-catching, as the wording and the main monochrome image are almost entirely in black."


 * TRANSLATION AND PROOF READING COMPLETED thisisace 23:07, 19 June 2007 (UTC)


 * SEHR GUT! Thanks for polishing this article!
 * T.Aita 11:50, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

Frank Fenstermacher
I just read in a NYT Style Mag article, "The Master of Allusion" (23 Feb 2020), that the German Sculptor Katharina Fritch (best known for her Trafalgar square work, "Hahn Cock') dated Fenstermacher in 1988, and he was the model for work "Tichgesellschaft". I don't know if that factoid belongs in this article, but I feel it helps create a picture of the 80's German music/art scene. --Nacho Fries (talk) 13:49, 25 February 2020 (UTC)