Talk:Derek Dougan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:30, 21 August 2016 (UTC)

Will review tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 20:30, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Blackburn Rovers

 * "a 4–0 win over Fulham, which began a sequence of five wins and a draw from Rovers's first six matches," - reptition of win(s)
 * Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
 * "the dourness of the club matched that of the town.I " - needs to be spaced out
 * Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Peterbrough United

 * "The move did though have it's benefits" - its
 * Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Leicester City

 * ""Foxes" to a seventh-place finish." - I think team would be better than the club's nickname
 * Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Wolverhampton Wanderers

 * "who quit the game to become a full-time Jehovah's Witness volunteer." - left
 * Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Delink Portugal, Hungary, Italy and the Netherlands per WP:OVERLINK
 * Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
 * "Spurs" goalkeeper Pat Jennings putting in an excellent performance " - exellent is NPOV
 * Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
 * "but managed to deny Leeds United the championship by beating Leeds on the final day of the season to prevent them from reaching Derby County's point tally," - reptition of Leeds
 * Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Media career

 * Do we know what was the name of the half-hour show he presented on BBC Radio Birmingham?
 * No.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Chairmanship of Wolves

 * Delink Saudis
 * Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Red Links
Links in red for seasons still untidy, will attend to them at some point unless someone else has a fast way to do it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1.152.107.52 (talk) 15:21, 16 May 2018 (UTC)