Talk:Derek Reese

references from primary sources
This article should have more episode references, like in the temp article Talk:List of Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles minor characters/Derek Reese. 70.55.203.112 (talk) 07:27, 22 September 2008 (UTC)

Way too much plot summary
The season 2 section has, by far, way too much plot summary. We do not need to chronicle every little action in every little episode. The section is written almost as a summary for each of these episodes. The sheer level of detail is entirely unnecessary and it needs to be cut. Look at the John Connor page for a model. This character that has appeared in three movies, an upcoming movie, and TV series, and has been portrayed by 4 actors, and it is barely longer than this page. Sum up the main points: the role that he serves in the show, his personality, etc., but avoid plot detail. Also, the last paragraph about the most recent episode is by far too sappy and whether or not Riley came from the future is still unconfirmed (I did not get that impression, though). So, like I said, cut back.kingdom2 (talk) 19:46, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

The grammar in this article also makes it nearly unreadable. Verb use inconsistencies are rampant. I've cut down some of the plot summary section and changed the verb usage, but got tired of editing. Someone else want to take a swing? --70.91.82.131 (talk) 21:02, 9 December 2008 (UTC)