Talk:Des White

Headings and sections
Manual of Style (layout) states that "Very short or very long sections and subsections in an article look cluttered and inhibit the flow of the prose." I agree with this and in the case of this article, which contains some single-sentence sections and can pretty much be viewed in its entirety without needing to scroll, I think section headings are not needed at all.--Jeff79 (talk) 00:44, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
 * I think more the problem is that the sections need expanding, rather than the headings are not needed. A single sentence on his domestic career for example does not do it justice. Mattlore (talk) 00:51, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok. But I'm just more concerned with handling the article the way it is now, rather than the way it should be.--Jeff79 (talk) 01:25, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Fair call. Made some changes which should have alleviated your concerns. Mattlore (talk) 04:47, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Cool.--Jeff79 (talk) 07:58, 24 October 2010 (UTC)

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