Talk:Desde un Principio: From the Beginning/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 20:40, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing my FLC for Selena, in return I will review this article. Best, Jona  talk to me  20:40, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

1 disambig
 * Fixed.

✅ ✅ I didn't know that it also applies to the music awards as well. ✅ ✅ ✅ish. I used some variations, but I think I might need help on this one. ✅
 * Infobox
 * The "length" section needs a duration template
 * Lead
 * You know Billboard needs to be in italics ;)
 * Numbers needs to comply with WP:ORDINAL
 * "and was named the best-selling album of 2000 on both." --> "and became the best-selling album of 2000 on both charts."
 * Too many sentences start with "It"
 * The RIAA needs to be spelled out completely

✅ Removed second instance. ✅ ✅
 * Content
 * Overlinking found (Contra la Corriente)
 * ""No Me Ames" (Track 1) is a duet with Jennifer Lopez - Lopez included it her debut album On The 6)." ---> "The opener, a tropical version of "No Me Ames", is a duet with American singer and actress Jennifer Lopez; she included the recording on her debut album On The 6 (1999)". Remember not to overuse parenthesis as it overthrows the flow of text.
 * ""Vivir lo Nuestro" is also a duet (featuring La India) that was originally recorded on the RMM Records compilation album Combinacion Perfecta." ---> ""Vivir lo Nuestro", featuring La India, was originally recorded on the RMM Records compilation album Combinacion Perfecta".

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 * Commercial reception
 * Numbers does not follow WP:ORDINAL
 * The second sentence could be combined with the first one
 * "On the Billboard Tropical Albums chart, the album debuted at #1 the week of 27 November 1999, and remained at #1 for five months" ---> "The album debuted atop the Billboard Tropical Albums chart on the week of 27 November 1999, and remained at number one for five consecutive months."
 * Inconsistency with dates (MMMM-DD-YYYY and DD-MMMM-YYYY)
 * "On the Billboard 200, the album peaked at #151. According to Billboard, this compilation was the best-selling album of 2000 on the Latin Albums and Tropical Albums charts in the United States" > "Desde un Principio: From the Beginning peaked at number 151 on the Billboard 200 chart and became the best-selling album of 2000 for the Top Latin Albums and Tropical Albums charts."
 * I believe it would be best to add what is a gold certification.
 * I added an internal link in "certified gold" to Music recording sales certification. Is that alright?

✅ I "promise". ✅
 * Critical reception
 * "Promise" remove the "e" ;)
 * Billboard is a printed source, needs italicizing pronto.

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 * Tracklisting
 * Ref needed (Allmusic)

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 * References
 * FN#1 publisher?
 * FN#3, FN#4, FN#5, FN#6, FN#7, FN#8, FN#16 Allmusic is a website, link Allmusic and Rovi Corporation in FN#3
 * FN#9 wikilink Amazon.com
 * FN#10 wikilink Billboard
 * Inconsistency with publisher(s) of Billboard magazine (Nielsen Business Media, Inc vs. Nieslon Company vs. Prometheus Global Media)


 * Putting the article until these issues have been dealt with. Best,  Jona  talk to me  21:13, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! Erick (talk) 03:54, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 * You're welcome =) I had fixed some minor things on the article and it is now ready for GA status. Great work! Jona  talk to me  14:01, 1 October 2012 (UTC)