Talk:Design management/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 02:17, 16 January 2011 (UTC) Please fix disamb links: Brunton and Farr. No bad links.
 * fixed Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

What is the relationship between this article and Design management in organization? Should the article be listed in a hatnote or a See Also section?
 * proposed Design management in organization for deletion Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * article Design management in organization deleted on January 23rd Wiki4des (talk) 23:55, 24 January 2011 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Prose is far from clear. Article should be rewritten completely.
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 21:01, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
 * proposed new article structure: User:Wiki4des Wiki4des (talk) 14:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Delete "has become a relevant discipline around the world during the last decade. It" in first sentence.
 * deleted Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "from the discovery phase (fuzzy front-end)" - unacceptable parenthetical. How can you equate the two terms?
 * deleted Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "phrased the term" -> "coined the term" or "invented the term"
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * In footnotes, spell out "Design Management Institute" as the publisher instead of abbreviating DMI.
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Inappropriate use of lists and tables.
 * changed Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Section and subsection headings have inappropriately capitalized words - "Design management in Companies" and "Design Management Hierarchy"
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Source for quote is http://www.dmi.org/dmi/html/aboutdmi/design_management.htm
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 16:08, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Fn 2 -only has month and year of retrieval. Should give full date of retrievals.
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 00:18, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Fn 20 - naked url. Use cite web
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 16:08, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Add publisher to all cites
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 00:18, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Fn 25 and 26 uses pp which means a range of pages, but only page 32 or 58 was given. Were all of these multiple references all really on the same page?
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 16:08, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Volume parameter should be just the volume number, not volume number a comma and the year.
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 16:08, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Need secondary sources independent of the design management movement and organizations such as Design Management Institute.
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 14:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Block quotes should be integrated into the prose.
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 21:01, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "applied in the company correlates" should be " applied in a company correlates" avoid improper use of the definite article.
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 16:08, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Lead paragraph needs to summarize the article.
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 21:01, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
 * " The Design Leadership Fellowship by the University of Oxford is founded." should be " The Design Leadership Fellowship at the University of Oxford is founded."
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 16:08, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * enlarged coverage Wiki4des (talk) 14:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Article presupposes the value of design management over other approaches.
 * done Wiki4des (talk) 21:01, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * File:Dm-definition.pdf probably needs an email to OTRS to document who owns the copyright and who is licensing it. Organization vs. individual?
 * OTRS pending Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * OTRC permission received (Ticket#2011011610006807) Wiki4des (talk) 08:38, 18 January 2011 (UTC)
 * File:Max Liebermann Porträt Peter Behrens.jpg - Max died on February 8, 1935, so the copyright expired in 2005 in some countries, 2035 in others.
 * changed image to one without copyright issues Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * The caption for tactical design management photo is too long and wordy.
 * shortened Wiki4des (talk) 14:39, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I am sorry, but this article needs to be completely rewritten and does not meet the criteria. Racepacket (talk) 04:16, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * thanks, all changes have been made, completing article in next step (see to-do list) for second GA application Wiki4des (talk) 00:18, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I am sorry, but this article needs to be completely rewritten and does not meet the criteria. Racepacket (talk) 04:16, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
 * thanks, all changes have been made, completing article in next step (see to-do list) for second GA application Wiki4des (talk) 00:18, 31 January 2011 (UTC)