Talk:Desjardin

A first version of the article - please help to improve it
Today I published a first article about Desjardin, a historic manufacturer of tins. Being an engineer, I felt attracted by the fact that they are so old, develop their own machines, and all of us know at least some of their products, like the famous Nivea tin. Please help improving it and to add additional source. Great if you could add some articles on their inventions like the Vaccum packaging device.

Also please comment if you think there are any major needs for improvement.

ScienceGuard (talk) 11:14, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

Promotional Content
The article had been flagged "content that is written like an advertisement". I removed all text and adjectives that might have been interpreted as promotional content. Please check whether there is still content that may raise concerns. If no further concerns are stated I will delete the flag. ScienceGuard (talk) 13:16, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

Flag Removed
After I rewrote content that might have read as promotional, I contacted the revisor who initially placed the flag and asked whether there is still any point of concern. As no further concern was raised, I removed the flag. ScienceGuard (talk) 12:47, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

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