Talk:Destanni Henderson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 23:07, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.

Infobox and lede

 * Citation needed for middle name and birth date
 * "as a freshman" "during her first year"

Early life and high school career

 * "was born in her hometown" is redundant; here would be a good place to include her birth date
 * and began working to improve her skills This reads quite vague; presumably she was doing that to some degree throughout her childhood

Recruiting

 * "recruit" should be linked here as it is in the lede
 * Mention what year A'ja Wilson was recruited

College career

 * "recorded a freshman season-high
 * Swap the clauses in the first phrase of the second paragraph

National team career

 * Good

Personal life

 * Information about her parents should be in the early life section

General comments

 * Images are properly licensed and relevant
 * No stability concerns in the revision history
 * Copyvio score looks good

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished. —  Ghost River  00:48, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I have addressed all of the points. Sportzeditz (talk) 13:52, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, happy to pass! —  Ghost River  03:56, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Nicely done ! Very impressive editing Sportzeditz. I'm working on the Diamond Johnson if you feel like taking a look, it could use some of your in depth knowledge. --Wil540 art (talk) 15:44, 15 January 2022 (UTC)