Talk:Destination X (2005)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:18, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:18, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Wonderful, I got a good reviewer.-- Will C  21:09, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "which he has sustained" had sustained.
 * "whoever the winning team represented," no comma needed here.
 * "building, when" building. When
 * "The second stage was a Three Way match," no comma needed
 * "B.G James," B.G.

Just a bit of copyediting needed. I'll put the article on hold and pass when it's fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:58, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Comment – Fixed the grammar and punctuation errors.  Del ♉ sion  23  (talk)  00:50, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I believe they are all fixed now.-- Will C  01:23, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good; article passed. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 02:10, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Nice, and thanks for the review man.-- Will C  06:40, 15 October 2011 (UTC)